Chinese Compo

AH! Today's Chinese Compo was not that bad... (yahoooo) I chose Q2; this is wot my story is about... (translated into EL, of course)
I heard a deafening bang while I was revising my homework. I looked out of the window and saw something that made my mouth gape in awe. I saw a man sprawled on the floor with a lot of gruesome blood downstairs. I ran downstairs to look at it clearly. Suddenly the man said, "help me do a favour..." I SCRAM, ran upstairs and called the ambulance. While waiting for the ambulance, I looked at the man again. The man said, "Underneath my bed, there is a priceless good. Please hand it to my parents..." Then, the ambulance came. The doctor checked the man, and realised that it had been dead for the past half hour. How could that be? I just talked to him about a minute ago... Then I went to the man's parents and asked them to check under the man's bed for something of price. They couldn't find anything. After that, I realised that I was so frightened I imagined the man talking. So, I continued revising my homework.
Well, kinda lame, but much better than my EL! My story was so damn boring like shit but I think I used enough adjectives and stuff???